Tuesday, November 3, 2009
Love as an element.
Like the 118 elements on the periodic table, like mountains and oceans, the universe is slowly revealing itself. Some things appear to be permanent, many appear fluid and changing. The force we call love is such an element. We can only understand it through its mutations, apparitions, and the feelings we experience when we possess it.
This poem of mine is about those first encounters.
Enjoy.
Element
Must I tell you in Latin, or Sanskrit,
Or in ancients’ scripts of
Tombstones and moldy signs?
I know you read the news-track the story
From one end to another-
Factual slips catch your eye.
You know everything
in print, all the elements of a life time.
I sit behind you in Chemistry
My whispers too soft for you to notice.
When the 118th element was added
to the periodic table
-translucent the two times that
Ununoctium appeared-
Sounds like Nostradamus you said,
Laughing.
Hardly worthy of all that attention and ink
You said and turned toward me.
But you didn’t see me
My whispers were too soft.
I wrote you a note
Left among ciphers and equations:
“I weigh more than
Oxygen and Water and Ununoctium
At high temperatures
I act in unexpected ways.
Can’t you smell my scent
Heaven - Earth –Eternity?”
If you find this in time, I wrote in Italic,
turn around and call my name.
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You creat a compelling scene in beautiful language. That final stanza--the note--is especially powerful, and the last lines rocked me.
Thanks for a new poem to start my day!
Chris
Wonderful, playful and - at the end - so poignant.
ah...i love a good love story...and did he turn? and did your elements collide? loved the last line as well...
I do wonder if he turned around?
Now I'm going to have to go to my priodic table and try to figure out the answer to your riddle.
What powerful words from the young you. And did the focus of your young love notice you?
xx
I love it Rosaria. Love is in the air. Are you and your Mr. doing lots and lots of kissing these days.
I love you.
Renee xoxo
Thank you for visiting my blog.
Your post brings back memories of chemistry lessons and my first real boyfriend!
Beautiful. nuff said.
So very charming! I especially liked the "sounds like Nostradamus" part.
Oh, love. Love - you! not love as a noun. Can love be a noun? Seems that should never be so. Oh love, you, Rosaria, gorgeous you. I'd kiss you if you were closer.
This is beauty.
xo
erin
Lovely. I can feel those adolescent emotions - is romantic love ever more real as when you are first feeling it?
Beautifully written, nothing forced. I enjoyed this very much
Sandi
My all girls school meant teenage love remained an unknown quantity! Some people have all the luck...
"My whispers too soft for you to notice". I love this line, which you repeated. It says so much in few words - those first utterings of love which are so unsure of themselves, not sure if they want to be heard or not, but in the end a clue is left. It's all left up to fate in the end, or maybe to science? hee hee.
love is in the mind and a healthy mind knows love :)
beautiful romantic poem Rosaria
best wishes
Ribbon x
Love as an element. Brilliant.
I loved the ending, so original and teasing...
Brilliant. Tender. Shy. And very, very romantic. Lovely poem Rosaria.
Ah. Young love.
how beautiful!
Completely and totally splendid! Passionate, real - wow, Rosaria. Wow.
WOW!
Love is the fifth element. I believe it (never thought about it before).
Yes indeed you are quite right. Thank you so much!
Once a romantic, always a romantic! Lovely poem! Now, you've really got me wondering if he turned?
Lovely
This is so beautiful.
And....?!
Wonderful poem and, of course, we are all dying to know if he, indeed, turned around. You can't leave us hanging...or can you?
i had a hard time with my chemistry class. but i just love this poem! :)
Yes, love as an element that is ever changing. Love your poem, especially the last stanza, revealing the depth of your maturity and childhood simultaneously.
What a wonderful poem. It reminds me that even at my age (63) I might still get in touch with that wonderful ache I felt when I was young. I need to go try a love poem.
what a poem!!! i love it!
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